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This contains yaoi.  If you don't like it, then why are you reading it?


"Sasuke.  Sasuke! OI TEME!  Naruto was desperately trying to get the raven's attention.  "What is it dobe?"  The raven finally answered, watching as the blonde's face turned red. "Uh.... wanna go get some ramen?"  The blonde's face turned even redder when Sasuke smiled and said, "Sure dobe.  By the way, You're cute when you blush."  Realizing what  he had just said, the raven changed the subject as fast as he could, but not fast enough to distract the blonde.  "Wait, did you just say I was CUTE?!" "Oh my god! He thinks I'm cute!!" Naruto thought to himself as the raven's words sank in.  Now it was the raven's turn to blush.  As his face turned a delicate red, Naruto smiled to himself.  "You know what teme?  You're cute when you blush too."  "N-Narut-" Sasuke didn't get a chance to finish his sentence.  Naruto had walked over and pressed his lips onto Sasuke's.  The blonde slipped his tongue into the raven's mouth and explored it thourolghy.  "Oh holy god I love him so much... Does this mean he loves me too?" The raven was so confused he pulled away from the blonde to ask.  "Does this mean you like me too?"  "Y-yeah... I've liked you for a whi- wait... Did you just say "too"?"  Both boys turned red as the raven nodded his head.  "Hehe... You're being cute again."  The raven smiled as his words sent the blonde over the edge.  His arm was grabbed and pulled towards the street.  "Uh.... come on! Let's go get some ramen!" 
This is only my second fan fiction, so please don't be mean!
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tazidevil Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2011  Student General Artist
very short, but very very good!! i love the reactions!!! welld one!!!
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onepiecetreasure Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Awwe, thanks! :D
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onepiecetreasure Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:iconsasunaruplz:
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Fischle Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yay they are the best couple ever XD
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onepiecetreasure Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah they are!! X3
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Fischle Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hihi :tighthug:
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onepiecetreasure Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
yo wud up wid da tite hug?
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Fischle Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hihi its your reward for the cute story and that you think about sasunaru :glomp:
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onepiecetreasure Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Awww! thanks!!!
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Fischle Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hehe no problem :D youre a very nice person :hump:
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